5.10.08

Do you hear?

It is fascinating,
what you can tell,
By the way someone,
Rings a bell
ハ~ロ___________.


Revision:

It is fascinating,
what you can tell,
By the way we hear,
the ringing of a bell
ハ~ロ___________.

5 comments:

Barry said...
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Barry said...

It is fascinating,
what you can tell,
By the way you can see,
black ink on a white screen.

Barry

Jordan said...

Ink on screen
The pixel poem says,
Do not use a pen,
You can delete it then.

Thanks Barry,
You made my day a little brighter.

Jordan

Barry said...

Ink on screen,
Fill in captcha,
Hit return,
Oh no, there's a typo!

Barry, who is too compulsive to permit a mistake!

Jordan said...

:-)

Thanks for looking!